haha i like the correct terminology of 'the price board thing'. This is looking good by the way, i know it's only a basic shapes design, but you can tell what it is so that can't be a bad start... :P
Evening Dan - chic template! A HUGE improvement - and you're cracking on with your scene I see - you might want to pursue the Crewdson route, and have some 'off-kilter' elements in the scene - for instance - if the car was a 'clown car' or similar? You know - something to push the narrative button a little harder...
and again - your blog is looking really nice - so, at risk of sounding like an old nag-bag, you might want to give more time to your spelling/grammar - yes, I know it's an informal space and we're all guilty of typos when we're posting, but think of this space as a 'published' platform - and people do judge on things like spelling etc... don't give anyone the wrong impression... I look forward to seeing more from you - good stuff, Dan!
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haha i like the correct terminology of 'the price board thing'. This is looking good by the way, i know it's only a basic shapes design, but you can tell what it is so that can't be a bad start... :P
Evening Dan - chic template! A HUGE improvement - and you're cracking on with your scene I see - you might want to pursue the Crewdson route, and have some 'off-kilter' elements in the scene - for instance - if the car was a 'clown car' or similar? You know - something to push the narrative button a little harder...
and again - your blog is looking really nice - so, at risk of sounding like an old nag-bag, you might want to give more time to your spelling/grammar - yes, I know it's an informal space and we're all guilty of typos when we're posting, but think of this space as a 'published' platform - and people do judge on things like spelling etc... don't give anyone the wrong impression... I look forward to seeing more from you - good stuff, Dan!
If you haven't seen it already - check out the link to Bharathi's blog - an alternate way to post your reviews/observations/analysis?
http://bharathianthonysamy.blogspot.com/2009/12/video-review-of-invaders-from-mars-by.html
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